Sharing with The Sunday Muse #228 , The Fashionable Twenties. A sycamore fairy sits crosslegged in the road Dragons swim toward smooth hills above the storms Vines embrace the telephone poles Someone washed the blue skies and she knows It's time to dare the salty foam It's time to wade through the eternal fields' folds And gather golden apples for home. Hoping this finds you with space to daydream and a good book in which to wander. Working on turning last week's prompt into a longer piece, as I found myself intrigued by the idea of tea in the garden as combat. Social situations are not my forte. As it's still Spider September, there will be a chihuahua-sized jumping spider that is none too happy about anything but hunting squirrels (that's for you, Mom). -- Chrissa
Twit? You? Not a chance, the poetry you shared proves otherwise.
ReplyDeleteYou ain't no twit
ReplyDeleteNever heard you giggle
Sun sets on frogs
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Et tu, Chrissa?
ReplyDeleteDespite the risk of Shay scorning me forever, I have to say I enjoy the occasional *well-written* haiku, which this is. It's excellent. Sadly, the form is probably the most abused one out there. But no twit could have written this one.
ReplyDeleteYour lines are evocative and bring much to think on in such a few words. Also, you are as far from being a twit as I am from winning a marathon or a beauty pageant. You are one of the most brilliant poets I know my friend! Never forget it!!!! <3
ReplyDeleteI'm convinced you don't qualify for twitdom!
ReplyDeleteI hear the thunder of hoof and see the shifting earth. This is very very evocative. Bravo.
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Much💜love
This is excellent.
ReplyDeleteNo twit, you. I love this!
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