Sharing with The Sunday Muse for Sunday Muse #197.
Photography by Kristine Wayman |
My hand was not shaped for the axe
so it waited--tooth in the tough wood;
back of its head warm, then hot, then cooler;
body dreaming of wood made useful.
When I brought it into the garage
and left it, carefully, in a corner,
it dreamed of being outdoors,
felt the thin frame of the garage,
the restless former forest underneath,
and, then, it was just an axe.
Silent, dreamless, and inert.
Our forests are long forgotten.
Missed y'all last week!
-- chrissa
We missed you too my friend! This is a deep and lovely ode to trees and all the ones long since gone to axes in greedy men's hands. It always saddens me when I drive by a large property where all the trees have been taken to accommodate a shopping center or neighborhood. It really is sad on so many levels. Beautiful writing Chrissa!
ReplyDeleteIt saddens me to see a tree cut down. Land developers are heartless and greedy, destroying much of beautiful for one more lot, one more house. Point well taken.
ReplyDeleteChrissa, I am sorry your axe has gone still and dreams no more. Such a nice write to read this morning. I've got stuff in my garage, some used and some not. Biggest bulk is two Ford Mustangs, a 1974 and a 1998, disabled but wanting to be on the go. No, wishes to go fast but doesn't chop wood.
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I was thinking of the wooden handle of the axe, too. I really like the way you wrote it, Chrissa. One of my favorites of yours.
ReplyDeleteThis is really clever - seen from the axe's perspective. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteSuch a melancholy atmosphere. I feel bad for opportunity cut short and then forgotten.
ReplyDeleteStunning poem, Chrissa! Stunning.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your musings on the journey of the tree, and those final two lines finish it beautifully:
ReplyDelete"Silent, dreamless, and inert.
Our forests are long forgotten."
Oooh! "body dreaming of wood made useful." is fantastic, and "tooth in the tough wood" is such a rugged image. I love you brought it around to the forest no longer there, that made a powerful ending.
ReplyDeleteI never really thought of the wooden handle of the axe before in that way. Strange that a product of a tree is used to cut down a tree. Welcome Back...
ReplyDeletePowerful. The last line made me appreciate the forest near our town even more.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful poem, and comment on our society.
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